The Power of “I” in Your Blog

 In Work Flow

After 25-plus years of taking myself a wee bit seriously as a writer and entrepreneur, I still squirm to sense just how much “I,” how much personal vulnerability works in my writing – whether it’s a poem, an essay, a book, or a blog article.

When you’re creating work that matters and trying to captivate the audiences whose lives you want to enrich, you don’t want “I” to botch your efforts and steal the show. Several years ago, I opened the lid on “I” in my early draft of the The Journey from the Center to the Page. My editor sent back a long letter with requested changes, among them: “Limit the personal references.” Ow.

So, I was pleased when I saw that one of my favorite bloggers on writing – Patrick Ross – was offering a course on “Writing Compelling Blog Posts.” Once a successful journalist, Patrick Ross left the comfort zone of a regular paying writing gig to school himself in writing creative nonfiction and fiction. In his forties, he entered Vermont College’s MFA in Creative Writing Program. He is in the midst of what I call a midlife launch. In his midlife launch, he has pursued mastery on three fronts: 1) the mastery of creative nonfiction craft; 2) the mastery of blogging; 3) the mastery of online and offline enterprising.

He’s doing well. Write to Done has named Patrick’s blog The Artist’s Road a Top Blog for Writers in 2011 and 2012. For good reason. Patrick consistently offers substantial insights on craft and on the writing life from his own perspective and from that of the artists and writers he interviews.

And starting September 24, he’s offering this blog writing class Writing Compelling Blog Posts at the Hill Center in Washington, DC, partnered with the acclaimed The Writer’s Center in Bethesda, Maryland.  (Sorry: Registration is closed.) The guest post below illustrates Patrick’s great work – and offers you smart tips for working with the ninth letter, the capital letter of Identity.

Add to the conversation below. Personal stories welcome. 😉  
-Jeffrey 

Image: Patrick Ross by Marisa Ross

The Power of “I” in Your Blog

By Patrick Ross

What is the most powerful word in any language? The first-person singular pronoun. In English its force is particularly stealthy, given we represent it with a single, rarely used vowel, “I.” As I teach in my class “Writing Compelling Blog Posts,” the power of this pronoun can be brought to any blog post, even when the actual pronoun never appears in the text.

The blogging spectrum is a wide one, from the corporation blog shilling its products to the teenage boy chronicling for his family his care of a foster Shih-Tzu. What all of these blogs have in common, however, is that they tell a story, and a story is best told by a strong narrator.

There are many lessons bloggers can borrow from personal essayists. A blog post–like a first-person exploration of the self and the larger world traditionally found in a personal essay—should create a connection with the reader. But a blog post–unlike some personal essays—also should have a specific accomplishment in mind. At the end of a good personal essay, we are often left with many questions to contemplate. At the end of a good blog post, we should have at least one answer to a proposed question.

Perhaps that answer is “Buy our product!” or “Vote for our candidate!” But the way to make that connection—to make the potential customer or voter act as you desire—is to introduce an element of the personal.

When I provide instruction to bloggers for corporations, trade associations, or politicians, they hear “personal” and they think “confessional.” This does not have to be the case. The brilliant personal essayist Phillip Lopate, in The Art of the Personal Essay, teaches us that if the narrator reveals any sort of potential vulnerability–even if the weakness is not significant–a sense of trust is created with the reader. The author can withhold a tremendous amount of far more sensitive information and the reader won’t notice its absence.

A highly successful technique for introducing the “personal” into a blog post is to abandon the omniscience that can so easily creep in. Confess up front that you do not have all of the answers, but are instead focused on finding a solution. Then state that you think you’ve made some progress, lay out your product or campaign position, and invite feedback. This technique 1) engenders you to the reader by a showing of imperfection; 2) triggers a key driver of any blog, conversation; and 3) overcomes the natural ego of any blog post, in which the blogger presumes others will want to seek out her opinion.

One trick to taking this approach is to write a first draft that is heavy on the first-person personal pronoun. Then rewrite the post to back out all of those appearances of “I.” The intimacy that came naturally when told from your point of view will remain, with the reader none the wiser on how it came to be in there.

So while blog posts differ from personal essays, the pioneering use of the first-person personal pronoun from Seneca (in Latin) to Montaigne (in French) are of great value to us online writers today, wherever we fall on the blog spectrum.

DROP IN
Where does your blog fall? To what extent do you exercise the power of “I” to engage your readers and advance your blog’s goals?

Patrick Ross is a professional writer and educator. The latest offering of his Writer’s Center workshop class “Writing Compelling Blog Posts” begins Monday, September 24th, 2012, at The Hill Center in Washington, D.C. His blog The Artist’s Road was named a Top Ten Blog for Writers for 2011-2012, and he is also an award-winning personal essayist who is pursuing an MFA in Creative Nonfiction from the Vermont College of Fine Arts. He lives with his wife and two teenage children in northern Virginia, and enjoys antique maps, compelling biographies, and bacon.

 

Share This Article:
Showing 0 comments
  • Patrick Ross
    Reply

    Jeffrey, thank you so much for hosting this guest post for me, and for
    that kind introduction. I read the opening paragraph of the intro and
    thought, “I don’t remember writing that, but it sounds just like me!”
    It’s nice to be here on Tracking Wonder, and to see the parallels
    between us. Thanks again.

  • Kate Arms-Roberts
    Reply

    Great post, Patrick. And thanks to Jeffrey for hosting it. I have been thinking a lot recently about how blogging and personal essay writing are similar and this is a nice addition to that train of thought.

    • Jeffrey Davis
      Reply

      I agree: Patrick clarified some key aspects for us.

  • stan stewart
    Reply

    I’m so glad to read what both Patrick and Jeffrey have written here. Thank you for the inspiration and the reminder to come from the place of vulnerability in my blog posts.

    • Jeffrey Davis
      Reply

      Stan~I’ve been suspect of people talking about vulnerability in blogging, but Patrick frames it in ways that ring true to me.

      • stan stewart
        Reply

        Agreed. Talking _about_ vulnerability can be left to the researchers. Writing from a vulnerable place is another story. And often a good one. 😉

  • Patrick Ross
    Reply

    Kate, great to see you here! I’m glad you found the post tied in with your recent thinking.

    Hey, Stan! I think your posts show a tenderness and raw honesty that really work, but I’m glad you feel the post can be of use.

  • Hallie Sawyer
    Reply

    Some of my best posts are when I do exactly what you are talking about. When I get personal, people can identify with me and feel like sharing. We make a connection and hopefully I’ve gained a loyal reader. And hopefully a friend. The connections are what I love the most about blogging. This post was a great reminder to stick to this format. Thanks!

    • Jeffrey Davis
      Reply

      Thanks for the reinforcement, Hallie. It’s connection we’re ultimately after, isn’t it?

    • Patrick Ross
      Reply

      Hi Hallie! I love your blog, and yes, you are good at making connections. I’m glad this post resonated with you.

  • Melissa Crytzer Fry
    Reply

    Loved this post. “Abandon the omniscience.” I agree – I’m not keen on blog posts where the blogger is asserting her opinion so strongly that you feel you’re being browbeaten. I also love the advice: “…if the narrator reveals any sort of potential vulnerability–even if the weakness is not significant–a sense of trust is created with the reader.” Isn’t that the same with public speaking… when a speaker is vulnerable, he connects best with his audience.
    Thanks for the great insight, Patrick.

    • Patrick Ross
      Reply

      Hi Melissa! Great to see you here. I like your parallel with public speaking. For me, that balance of vulnerability vs. confidence might be harder in a public speaking setting, because I would be concerned that I might not convey enough “authority” to listen. But I think that is easier in a workshop-type environment vs. a lecture hall. Much to think about.

  • Jeffrey Willius
    Reply

    Great message, Patrick and Jeffrey! In my previous life as a communicator organizations mounting capital and endowment campaigns, when clients struggled with the content and tone of their appeals, I reminded them that you can never go wrong telling your story — and that of people you’ve helped.
    So… whether it’s “I” or “they,” it clearly trumps “you;” people don’t want to be lectured.

    • Patrick Ross
      Reply

      Hi Jeffrey! Yes, telling your story is a key to marketing and communications; when you think of yourself as a storyteller, you’re on your way!

  • Nina Badzin
    Reply

    Really interesting, Patrick! I agree with you . . . but I have been wondering lately if I’m guilty of TOO MUCH “I” . . . it’s hard to know the right balance.

pingbacks / trackbacks
  • […] Center, writer and creativity consultant Jeffrey Davis of Tracking Wonder has kindly offered me a guest-post slot on his blog. I write about how a blogger can make the most effective use of the single most powerful word in […]

Leave a Comment

Tracking Wonder Podcast

In-depth conversations to inspire you to shape your best work with more possibility, impact, and – yes – wonder.

» START LISTENING